A school boy decides to face his fear of heights by climbing onto the roof of a nearby abandoned building. One which has been sealed from the outside world for years and contains a terrible secret...
I loved this story! I started reading it yesterday, and then had to leave for work, and couldn't wait to finish it today!
                                    
                                    First, though it's a basic ghost story, it's written beautifully. I really appreciate your style of writing, Lyrical, phrase-heavy styles sometimes earn a lot of criticism, as many audiences don't want to work that hard to read a work. But, I think it's amazing! Be careful with your phrasing, though. Because of your elaborate sentence structures, you utilize a number of prepositional phrases and sometimes you've chosen the incorrect preposition or used one where you should use an adverb. PM me if you'd like a few examples of this.
                                    
                                    There's something about combining a classic style like yours with horror. I have always loved this combination. Your work reminds me of Poe, old Sherlock Holmes stories (with your BRILLIANT ability to build suspense into your stories), and turn of the century horror. If you can find it, check out a book called "Too Many Ghosts."
                                    
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I loved this story! I started reading it yesterday, and then had to leave for work, and couldn't wait to finish it today!
                                    
                                    First, though it's a basic ghost story, it's written beautifully. I really appreciate your style of writing, Lyrical, phrase-heavy styles sometimes earn a lot of criticism, as many audiences don't want to work that hard to read a work. But, I think it's amazing! Be careful with your phrasing, though. Because of your elaborate sentence structures, you utilize a number of prepositional phrases and sometimes you've chosen the incorrect preposition or used one where you should use an adverb. PM me if you'd like a few examples of this.
                                    
                                    There's something about combining a classic style like yours with horror. I have always loved this combination. Your work reminds me of Poe, old Sherlock Holmes stories (with your BRILLIANT ability to build suspense into your stories), and turn of the century horror. If you can find it, check out a book called "Too Many Ghosts."
                                    
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I loved this story! I started reading it yesterday, and then had to leave for work, and couldn't wait to finish it today!
                                    
                                    First, though it's a basic ghost story, it's written beautifully. I really appreciate your style of writing, Lyrical, phrase-heavy styles sometimes earn a lot of criticism, as many audiences don't want to work that hard to read a work. But, I think it's amazing! Be careful with your phrasing, though. Because of your elaborate sentence structures, you utilize a number of prepositional phrases and sometimes you've chosen the incorrect preposition or used one where you should use an adverb. PM me if you'd like a few examples of this.
                                    
                                    There's something about combining a classic style like yours with horror. I have always loved this combination. Your work reminds me of Poe, old Sherlock Holmes stories (with your BRILLIANT ability to build suspense into your stories), and turn of the century horror. If you can find it, check out a book called "Too Many Ghosts."
                                    
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I loved this story! I started reading it yesterday, and then had to leave for work, and couldn't wait to finish it today!
                                    
                                    First, though it's a basic ghost story, it's written beautifully. I really appreciate your style of writing, Lyrical, phrase-heavy styles sometimes earn a lot of criticism, as many audiences don't want to work that hard to read a work. But, I think it's amazing! Be careful with your phrasing, though. Because of your elaborate sentence structures, you utilize a number of prepositional phrases and sometimes you've chosen the incorrect preposition or used one where you should use an adverb. PM me if you'd like a few examples of this.
                                    
                                    There's something about combining a classic style like yours with horror. I have always loved this combination. Your work reminds me of Poe, old Sherlock Holmes stories (with your BRILLIANT ability to build suspense into your stories), and turn of the century horror. If you can find it, check out a book called "Too Many Ghosts."
                                    
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I loved this story! I started reading it yesterday, and then had to leave for work, and couldn't wait to finish it today!
                                    
                                    First, though it's a basic ghost story, it's written beautifully. I really appreciate your style of writing, Lyrical, phrase-heavy styles sometimes earn a lot of criticism, as many audiences don't want to work that hard to read a work. But, I think it's amazing! Be careful with your phrasing, though. Because of your elaborate sentence structures, you utilize a number of prepositional phrases and sometimes you've chosen the incorrect preposition or used one where you should use an adverb. PM me if you'd like a few examples of this.
                                    
                                    There's something about combining a classic style like yours with horror. I have always loved this combination. Your work reminds me of Poe, old Sherlock Holmes stories (with your BRILLIANT ability to build suspense into your stories), and turn of the century horror. If you can find it, check out a book called "Too Many Ghosts."
                                    
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I loved this story! I started reading it yesterday, and then had to leave for work, and couldn't wait to finish it today!
                                    
                                    First, though it's a basic ghost story, it's written beautifully. I really appreciate your style of writing, Lyrical, phrase-heavy styles sometimes earn a lot of criticism, as many audiences don't want to work that hard to read a work. But, I think it's amazing! Be careful with your phrasing, though. Because of your elaborate sentence structures, you utilize a number of prepositional phrases and sometimes you've chosen the incorrect preposition or used one where you should use an adverb. PM me if you'd like a few examples of this.
                                    
                                    There's something about combining a classic style like yours with horror. I have always loved this combination. Your work reminds me of Poe, old Sherlock Holmes stories (with your BRILLIANT ability to build suspense into your stories), and turn of the century horror. If you can find it, check out a book called "Too Many Ghosts."
                                    
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