The Asylum On Chestnut Street

The Asylum On Chestnut Street

10.1K Reads 698 Votes 13 Part Story
shay By shayxb Updated Feb 26

An adventurous girl on a pink bicycle meets a tall blonde boy on Chestnut Street.  Right in front of the old burnt-down mental hospital.  What can go wrong?

This story is interesting eventhough im still at chapter 1,soon i will be finishing is book
Subcontinent Subcontinent Oct 21, 2015
You're making me both love and hate the character of Wendy! I love the dynamic of the relationship between her and Kyle, both  teasing older brother/caring younger sister and strangers, I can't wait to see how that pans out
Subcontinent Subcontinent Oct 21, 2015
This is amazing, beautiful description and original and interesting characters, even the dialogue brings them to life which is something I personally struggle with. You've certainly got me hooked
pascale2468 pascale2468 Oct 13, 2015
I like it. It would be fun if the chapters were a slight longer?
KatieRizada KatieRizada Oct 08, 2015
So this is a critique,first it was weird in the smoking kyle, in the near house the expression is kinda vague, well the lines were beautifully written,just put on emotions I mean more emotions to make it creepier 
                              
                              Hope this would help,
                              XoXo
purplelover289 purplelover289 Oct 03, 2015
I really like this story so far! Kyle is so creepy and mysterious. I like him as a character. :D