Visions( On hold sorry)

Visions( On hold sorry)

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TinkerbellLOVER By TinkerbellLOVER Updated Dec 20, 2010

At first, Leila Night, thinks she is having dreams. But then when she meets Nick Nelson they become stronger or worse in her case. She doesn't know what to do. One day she finds a mysterious note saying that her future is all set out but she needs to go to the forest that is right behind her house and meet the person that left the note. Will she let Nick help her? Or will she go all alone into the woods and find out what her visions mean?

FrozenDreams FrozenDreams Oct 10, 2010
@TinkerbellLOVER AWWWWWWWWWWWWW, dwyyyyyyyyy, u just started so yeah, im glad i gave you good dvise (; LOL. loving you too!
FrozenDreams FrozenDreams Oct 10, 2010
@TinkerbellLOVER lol yeah u should do tht. LOL, thank you <33
TinkerbellLOVER TinkerbellLOVER Oct 10, 2010
@FrozenDreams hey thanks for commenting yur like the only person. Tear rolling down my cheeck. Any who ill mention yuh in the fourth chapter cause yur giving me good advisse. Already loving yuh ahahahahahha thanks again.
TinkerbellLOVER TinkerbellLOVER Oct 10, 2010
@FrozenDreams thank you I'll try to make them longer. Yes I was going to include what the parents are saying but ill do after the ummmm third chpater? Should I do that? Like as a flashback. Also keep going with yur story I love it! 
FrozenDreams FrozenDreams Oct 10, 2010
wow again, my second vote for u! LOL. just one thing, i noe what u said in your comment at the end of the book, but readers loveee long chapters (like me.) u could have included what the pareents whhere saying. or more details, you know? anyways, great job, 
                              continuing .>>>>>>>>>>>>>
FrozenDreams FrozenDreams Oct 10, 2010
woooooow, very interesting. i accually loved it. trust me, just advertise this a bit, and itll become verrry popular! ugh, i needa read the rest, thats how much i liked this one. (; keep it up! <33