5. At Her Command (BWWM) [Book One] #wattys2016

5. At Her Command (BWWM) [Book One] #wattys2016

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kudz12 By kudz12 Completed

"If you prick us do we not bleed? If you tickle us do we not laugh? If you poison us do we not die? And if you wrong us shall we not revenge?"
  
  William Shakespeare
  
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  Highest ranking #103 in Romance
  Highest ranking #51 in General Fiction 
  
  Thrown out of her home by the man she thought loved her. Now homeless, pregnant with a three year old in tow, what would Melinda do to provide for her children when he had stolen from her the one thing she had worked so hard to build. Hatred, anger and pain were her tormentors as she walked out of her home. Replaced by a nonentity she had discovered truly existed after discarding all the rumors. 
  
  Lincoln Shields, the epitome of perfection every woman's dream, but his heart belonged to only one person. His childhood friend who he hadn't seen in fifteen years due to circumstances beyond their control. How would she react when he told her his true feelings.
  
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  "Wait were are you going?" I asked her shifting in my seat.
  "Out. Don't speak to me until you tell me the real reason you brought us here a week earlier that planned. I trusted you to get married out of the blue. Now all I want is this one thing, just the truth. You and I both know we didn't need to get married to come here, you could have used work as an excuse, not a honeymoon," she said angrily making me flinch in my seat. 
  
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  "I would give anything if you were two people, so I could call up the one who is my friend and tell her about the one I like so much," he whispered. "I am in love with you Mel," he said softly.

Wow 😳 I hope she's make her husband paid for what he's did to her 💚💚💚💚💚
Angielb73 Angielb73 Mar 12
Mannnn he would be on the ground and she would to cause if I was her they both be in the hospital like in Madea voice I want hevlf
jonnnjid jonnnjid Jul 15
HELL NAH NIGGA!!!!! WTF U THINK U DOIN HITTING A PREGNANT WOMAN!!!!!!!!
shyanne899 shyanne899 Mar 02
Before I leave the house I am blowing it up so ok think you gonna cheat me out my own stuff. Kill yuh dead and fi yuh woman tell her seh not to worry she can have yo and anything that belongs to you but hell no not my company you ain't  kiss enough dicks to get my company
Marie-Ping Marie-Ping Jan 15
What kind of an man would abandon his pregnant wife for another one😠
monsoon12 monsoon12 Feb 18
Are you sure that's yours? If she can open up her legs for a married man, she can open up her legs for another. JS