Secrecy - Book 1: Curse (On Hold)

Secrecy - Book 1: Curse (On Hold)

467 Reads 13 Votes 5 Part Story
Iera Sakura By Iera42 Updated Jun 15, 2013

When a young royal finds himself falling for the woman forbidden to him by his people, he breaks all convention to pursue her. Aiden, a newer king, gives his heart to a witch known as White Fay, and marries her despite his kingdom's wishes. Legend has it that mortals and witches can't conceive, but despite all the odds, Aiden and White Fay bring a young girl, Emily, into the world. But their bundle of joy brings forth a life changing backlash from the monarchy. The witch bloodline is nearly wiped out entirely, and the little girl disappears into obscurity, for a time. 

Many years later Emily resurfaces, alone, unaware of her parent's identity, and cursed to live life as a wolf in the Dark Forest. Emily's curse only allows her to turn human for a short span of time. When she encounters a young man from the outside world who offers to help her find her parents, she takes him up on the offer. Will she be able to re-connect with her parents and find out the story behind their disappearance? And if she does, will she be prepared for the truth behind why they abandoned her?

Summary Credit to @jr0127

thHadley thHadley Jun 18, 2013
I got a bit confused during some parts and i totally understand that your grammar won't be perfect but maybe you could advertise for an editor? A lot of people would be happy to edit your story and it might get more votes:) I like the plot, it is very interesting and draws me in:)
Iera42 Iera42 Jun 14, 2013
@Alecia_Stone Well, i keep thinking about that too and I'm not really good with that time setting and their dialog. So, I just thought I just create this world I mix both. I'm not sure it's working but I'll try not to make it less weird. Thanks for pointing that out!
The-Superstar The-Superstar May 31, 2013
What I can say is that I loved this. This is great! Just make the description more mysterious. It'll draw more people in!
                              amazing though!
Iera42 Iera42 May 27, 2013
@Always_Sad Thank you! Your review really made my day :') I got a minor writer's block that I'm trying to push through by joining a couple of short story competition. I'll try to update asap! Bye :D
Always_Glad Always_Glad May 27, 2013
The whole chapter was good especially how it started! A few mistakes were and here, but other than that I really enjoyed reading this. Your writing skills is very good from the looks of it!
                              Well off to reading more, well and a few!
Iera42 Iera42 May 20, 2013
@MNLeuca Thank you for your review it means a lot to me :) I will do my best to improve my writing! :D