Irresistible [H.S.]

Irresistible [H.S.]

15.9K Reads 470 Votes 16 Part Story
Stella Ray By StellaRay1 Updated Jan 04, 2016

What happens when an irresistible regular girl meets an infamous far-from-regular boy?
The struggle is real.

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bob_duncan69 bob_duncan69 May 22, 2016
YES I LOST THIS BOOK BUT I JUST FOUND IT AGAIN AND IM SO PUMPED WOOHOO TIME TO KEEP READING
gucio640 gucio640 Nov 12, 2015
Nicely written! I think your character's voice sounds very real/convincing. Keep it up :D
StellaRay1 StellaRay1 Nov 05, 2015
Thanks for reading and commenting, guys. I really appreciate it!
StylisticMoods StylisticMoods Nov 03, 2015
Great start! You've got a lot of fragments though and while some add to the thought process others can be combined for a better effect :)
jenalee28 jenalee28 Oct 31, 2015
Great start! I loved the interaction between the "lunatics" lol. Very funny :)
a-dora-ble a-dora-ble Oct 30, 2015
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                              My brother behaves like that, and he's 14 xD Some people are just unnaturally energetic in the morning, while I'm a cross between a zombie and a cave-man. SIGH