A Split Second.

A Split Second.

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Laurie Marie By NavyBrat1994 Updated Jan 19, 2011

It takes a split second for your whole world to implode. In Casey's case, over the years she's lost a mother, a father, and a twin. She's been to over twenty foster homes in ten years. They can't handle her, apparently. But is it really that they can't handle her, or they can't handle her depression. Will anyone be able to help her?

Chris_critique Chris_critique Oct 09, 2010
Thats maybe more like it, but almost there and i get what you're trying to high light here.
                              a slight improvement from your last, makes a lot of sense now.
                              chris_critique