ULTIMATA

ULTIMATA

441 Reads 14 Votes 1 Part Story
narkobar naruut By narkobar Completed

The streets were suddenly teeming with people running around aimlessly seeking refuge.

"Adam." Vera's voice wavered. "Are we going to die?" 

OperationTacoz OperationTacoz Mar 03, 2012
Wow!  Really good start.  I think this plot definitely has some potential.  Please upload more soon!  I'll keep reading :)
narkobar narkobar Oct 15, 2010
@catzlover  im glad u liked it. thank u for your support. stay tuned =)
narkobar narkobar Oct 08, 2010
@chairsniffa im glad u like it. thx, mate. ah, i see we r neighbors. XD
narkobar narkobar Oct 08, 2010
@jarsamiir thank u for your kind  comment. More stories coming (with different endings, even happy ones) . 
                              
                              pls support my stories.  stay tuned =)
jarsamiir jarsamiir Oct 08, 2010
A captivating fast paced romance story with a touch of humor and sci-fi. :)
                              
                               I wish the ending was somewhat different though.  sniff... sniff...  (i'm a sucker for happy endings). looking forward to reading more of your work. Great job, dude :) 
narkobar narkobar Oct 08, 2010
@Purrnsimple Thank u for commenting.  I'm looking forward to adding more short stories in the near future.   Stay tuned :)