No one knows

No one knows

11.4K Reads 332 Votes 6 Part Story
bamagirl212 By bamagirl212 Updated Mar 12, 2014

I felt hands go around my waist. "Mike get off me please," I muttered. "Why should I? You'd like it anyway," he said. Annabell Jones had been bullied most of her life. Her bet friend moved schools two years ago and now she's all alone. She has had a crush on her best friends brother who is only a year and a half older than her. Little does she know he likes her back. But what lengths will be go to to get her back when her stalker takes er away?

    Looked Luke upon youtube he's actually pretty good first one I heard was strip it down next Kiss tomorrow -the song the character is singing to .
    Really good start steady with a good ripple of tides lol I hope you get what I'm saying overall good chapter .
    MyOtps1 MyOtps1 Mar 08
    Praise you Jarret! Thank you! So much! Mike go to hell...oh wait that's where I am uhhhh go to the moon and stay there and die!
    SamWriter16 SamWriter16 Oct 04, 2013
    I liked the older version, but this isn't bad, I guess I have to look at it as a new story. But it is really good!
    1047kclb 1047kclb Apr 24, 2013
    KEEP WRITING PLEASE!  I think will be an interesting story becuz the plot is different. I am ESTACTIC to keep reading!!!
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    mcsniff mcsniff Apr 11, 2013
    I really like this. I feel more connected to the character because of the more detail put into the chapter. Update ASAP!! I want to know what's coming :D