Rejected Then Revived

Rejected Then Revived

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queenyaz By queenyaz Updated Apr 15, 2013

Sapphire was loved and cared for by her family, until the day of their soon to be Alpha's sixteenth birthday. Sapphire turned out to be his mate, but being the fat and ugly girl she was, got rejected and publicly humiliated by him. Her whole pack was disgraced and embarrassed of her and as he parents couldn't take the burden, they kicked her out, off to England to live with her aunt and uncle.
However three years later and sapphire has just started her senior year for a day when she is suddenly called back home. Forced to leave her new friends within the day she returns back to her previous pack, the Silver Moon Pack.
But what will they do when they see the new, beautiful and world number one street fighting champion Sapphire?
Read to find out :) My first story so please HAVE MERCY ;)

MioNio1069 MioNio1069 Jun 09
This book seems kinda like "mate or not youre still a jerk"...
Read my rant book on hp but i need to change the title to almost all books on wattpad
Green-power Green-power Jul 25, 2014
Its only my opinion, change the opening with her Aunty picking her  up from school and conversation to cover some of the minor things. This would up grade your story from good to brilliant.
- - Apr 12, 2013
Funny with the 'have mercy' for the description of your first book :')
ATeenageRunaway ATeenageRunaway Apr 12, 2013
No matter how much the parent is disappointed in the child. They would never say the things, Sapphire's parents said. It's very unlikely. Even the hate from the high-school is exaggerated. 
                              Other than that. Interesting plot.
queenyaz queenyaz Apr 11, 2013
@mojonight5 haha aww thank you! :D i promise I'll update ASAP some time today :)