Renovating His Heart             #Wattys2016

Renovating His Heart #Wattys2016

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Sheri Scarsella By MrsScarsella Completed

Ty Parks, Construction Manager for Evans Construction, is content with his life and his job.  His boss, the Owner of Evan's Construction, has even offered the business to Ty when his deteriorating health finally takes his life.  Ty doesn't need anything more. He doesn't need a woman to complete his life and he sure as hell doesn't need one at his job site.  

Grace Evans wanted nothing more than to prove to her father that the Evan's Construction legacy can be kept in the family.  Just because she's a woman, doesn't mean she isn't capable of managing a thriving, all male, construction company.  Hell, that's what she went to school for.
So when Bill Evans puts some heavy duty constraints in his will, Grace and Ty are forced to work together in order to get the one thing they both want most, ownership of Evan's Construction.  What they didn't anticipate was the attraction that comes along with the rules.

arrowheads arrowheads Feb 25
okay first of all, I love the blurb which summarized your whole plot line and concept, and it interested me greatly! This chapter was written so well, I enjoyed every word of it. Great details and the way you introduced Grace was spot on. Great job x
Ah Ah!!! I love the ending, it's a great start. I love all the descriptions because it allows me to picture everything in my mind. To be honest, I've started to be hooked when Grace made her entrance which is okay.
                              ps: when you wrote: " he cleared this throat" did you meant his throat?
The ended had my jaw dropped! Your writing style is sweet and simple, which makes it easier for the reader to understand. I love the way your words flow together smoothly without any effort. I'm in love with this!
He was such a pig!  Even if she was sent as a joke I would think he would've taken the hide road and not disrespect the woman.  Oh, he's going to have a hard time living this one down. 
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Great start! The chapter was written really well! I love how strong of a character grace is! It was so funny when he realized that she was serious. I can't wait to see what happens next!
I like the title of the story. It goes well with what the story seems to be about. Great job with the dialogue and descriptions. Your characters seem realistic and easy to relate to. So good job. I don't think i spotted any errors either.