The Pure And The Half (Discontinued?)

The Pure And The Half (Discontinued?)

14.8K Reads 493 Votes 16 Part Story
Angrygnomeboi By Hetaliafanwriter Updated May 28

Just a simple reminder note for those who read it

  • aphamerica
  • aphgermany
  • aphitaly
  • aphprussia
  • aphromano
  • frukifyousquint
  • hetalia
  • usuk
CupcakeQueen40 CupcakeQueen40 Mar 23, 2016
*is expecting Italy to jump out yelling Pasta* No? Okay...moving on..
Sypheria Sypheria Apr 05, 2016
Good chapter but please use commas and points! 'As' doesn't do the job
- - Aug 13, 2016
The plot is great, actually! But some constructive criticism, when you're doing dialogue, you capitalize the first letter as if you're doing a sentence. And if you want to add something in between, you put a comma. Like this~
                              "Hello," said the tall man. "My name is Jack."
TheRandomNoodle TheRandomNoodle Apr 10, 2016
This is totally off topic but am I the only one if I have to walk home in the dark I acted like I'm being chased by vampires?
- - Dec 13, 2015
Update soon I don't think I can wait!!! Also I think the way you write is awesome!
Otaku_Izumi_kun Otaku_Izumi_kun Oct 28, 2015
This is a cool story so far can't wait for he next chapter !