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Forgotten Love.

Forgotten Love.

1.2K Reads 35 Votes 8 Part Story
Jezzabelle By Jezzabelle Updated Feb 03, 2011

He's left her alone for years but had decided to come back now? For what? This story is about Essa who has all but forgotten about love since her first love, Jonathon left her for no apparrant reason. What is she going to do when he suddenly appears in the middle of night in her bedroom? Read on to find out....

painismydrug painismydrug Jan 09, 2011
There are some wee typos and spelling mistakes in this first part. Maybe you could read through it again. Otherwise, I think its off to a great start. Reading on. Voted. :) 
OMGguyLOL OMGguyLOL Jan 09, 2011
Nice~~~~ But a little confuse~ Is this the present or the past? But definitely Nice! 
Jezzabelle Jezzabelle Oct 08, 2010
@xxcrimsonxshellxx - Thanks! I'll remember to go over it more thoroughly before I post! Thanks again! 
antheias antheias Oct 08, 2010
Hmm a few mistakes here and there, but definitely good~
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