~The Inner Luna~

~The Inner Luna~

93.3K Reads 1.9K Votes 21 Part Story
~Lala~ By LatinaNCali Completed

Elizabeth is a city girl, who been living alone for a long time and has no family. She ends up moving to a small town because of her job. What she don't know is that this town is full of Wolves. Then she finds out that she does has family and the Alpha in this pack is her mate.........

LatinaNCali LatinaNCali Jul 28, 2013
@SecretScript Thank You....yea I notice I have to go over it again but I think I just need to have it edit by a professional. Thank you for letting me know that......trust me it was worst lol..... :)
- - Jul 28, 2013
Just a bit of editing and some work on the tenses and this'll be great!
LatinaNCali LatinaNCali Jun 16, 2013
@AuraAurora Thanks :) and thanks for RoseP456 she help me so much....... :)
LatinaNCali LatinaNCali Jun 11, 2013
@DBParks  Thanks I really appreciate it a lot....yea i notice that in the beginning too but as you get further it is somewhat a little better but yea i will be going over it when i am done.....thanks again :)
LatinaNCali LatinaNCali May 27, 2013
@AuraAurora Thanks for giving it a try and if its still way too much I won't be mad if you stop reading it :)
LatinaNCali LatinaNCali May 27, 2013
@AuraAurora Thanks that means a lot.....and your right about the information about the character great idea will do that next time.....and as you go future into the the story i did that shorten the paragraph....tell me what you think later :)