Business and pleasure

Business and pleasure

8.2K Reads 268 Votes 5 Part Story
Veronica.F By panda0v0 Updated Dec 25, 2015

After the Lisanna comes back
A LaLu of there new bond and success. Mature content you have been warned.
Thought not sure The lemons will be that good/ let me know

SuperSmashSis SuperSmashSis Dec 05, 2015
so i just saw this in "lalu" and i was like sure add to library then i began reading it im like ok typical fanfiction then i read this chapter and decided i don't like lemons
                              
                              i just don't like lemons sorry
SUTAisaSTAR SUTAisaSTAR Oct 18, 2015
OoO!!! I was reading this and I looked in the recommendations and saw my story!!!!!!! That's never happened to me before! 
                              Ps great story! Please update soon!
panda0v0 panda0v0 Oct 04, 2015
Ok thankful for the first comment, very helpful. Will do it in 3rd chapter, and will edit 1&2 ones when I can.
Lin_Dragon_Dreyer Lin_Dragon_Dreyer Oct 04, 2015
Nice! All I have a problem with is that there is no spacing between when Laxus is talking and when Lucy's talking. You can't tell who is speaking what. Maybe put some apostrophes( " ) to separate their sentences.