hey guys.....this is my first writing.....excuse if any mistakes...in gramitical...
Hey you can use direct speech instead of thoughts. It could be more helpful in writing! It's just a suggestion though. Nice story btw
Hahaha what a funny way to be introduced ;) It's progressing well~ :D
if ur writing 2 pov ...u can use 3 rd party pov or author pov.....it will be great ......ur story is good