A Journey of two souls in marriage

A Journey of two souls in marriage

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himugoose By himugoose Updated Jun 26

hey guys.....this is my first writing.....excuse if any mistakes...in gramitical...

Hey you can use direct speech instead of thoughts. It could be more helpful in writing! It's just a suggestion though. Nice story btw
akrox58 akrox58 Dec 22, 2015
Hahaha what a funny way to be introduced ;) It's progressing well~ :D
Digby777 Digby777 Dec 22, 2015
if ur writing 2 pov ...u can use 3 rd party pov or author pov.....it will be great  ......ur story is good