A Journey of two souls in marriage

A Journey of two souls in marriage

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himugoose By himugoose Updated Jun 26, 2016

hey guys.....this is my first writing.....excuse if any mistakes...in gramitical...

  • iife
  • love
  • marriage
  • passion
  • romance
lilyrajput lilyrajput Jun 13
Bhumi means earth ( connect with earth means values​ of one's family ...too) 
                              
                              
                              And Akash means sky ( free soul ) 
                              
                              
                              This is very good 🌟 ing .
                              Today I find such a beautiful story by you writer
iamcrazyforlove iamcrazyforlove Mar 23, 2016
Hey you can use direct speech instead of thoughts. It could be more helpful in writing! It's just a suggestion though. Nice story btw
akrox58 akrox58 Dec 22, 2015
Hahaha what a funny way to be introduced ;) It's progressing well~ :D
Digby777 Digby777 Dec 22, 2015
if ur writing 2 pov ...u can use 3 rd party pov or author pov.....it will be great  ......ur story is good