Making A Bad Boy

Making A Bad Boy

227K Reads 5.8K Votes 33 Part Story
Sasha By sasha_94 Completed

Leigh Desmond has always been the bad girl, the girl who didn’t care about anyone’s feelings, the girl who broke all the rules, and didn’t need anyone. That is until she meets Kyle Marchetta, the golden boy.  Whoever says good guys finish last had clearly never met Kyle, can he tame Leigh, or does he succumb and fall for the bad girl?

IncoherentDrivel IncoherentDrivel May 03, 2013
This is a little too explict for my taste, though i will say that this proluge was well written because i just couldnt tell what happened. Though this genre i avoid, it's not my cup of tea so im not bashing you.
teen-fighter teen-fighter May 01, 2013
Watch out for grammatical errors such as capitalization and punctuation!! 
                              The character development is great, and I love the air of mystery that you put in the story!! Like I said, if you just work on the grammar, this would be off to an awesome start!! ^^
teen-fighter teen-fighter May 01, 2013
Wow. what a twist! Usually its the 'bad boy' and then the 'good girl' but I love how you took it to another level. Great prologue!!
Drea14_ac Drea14_ac May 01, 2013
OMG I"M HOOKED!!!!!!!!!!! IT'S GOING IN MY LIBRARY!!!!! :D I LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!!!!! :D
sub_lime sub_lime May 01, 2013
pretty interesting ! You wrote the action very well, and I loved the fun attitude you gave this chapter, it was great to read as well ! And the end was pretty interesting, I really wonder if leigh's mom will find out !
sub_lime sub_lime May 01, 2013
and I couldn't* care less about her feelings. Aside from that, this beginning was written very well !! Your writing described what was going on pretty smoothly. I can't really tell if this is chapter 1 or a blurb/prologue though lol. Oh well x) nice start , voted !