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Dustbin Cat

Dustbin Cat

1K Reads 58 Votes 4 Part Story
chicken nugget By hopedonuts Updated Jul 06, 2013

Fred has lived on the streets for as long as he can remember. That is, until a girl named Juliette comes along his dustbin one afternoon. He can do something which she can’t, and she has something that he wants. A deal and a friendship of sorts are set up, and it all sounds quite normal - until you realise that Fred is just a cat.  © 2013 @nations

hopedonuts hopedonuts Jun 28, 2013
@BellaMilano it's been sorted now :) and hopefully it stays like that, lol.
BellaMilano BellaMilano Jun 25, 2013
@nations oh, that's comical, and you're welcome. i don't see a point to being rude. xD
BellaMilano BellaMilano Jun 23, 2013
you should space out your paragraphs and keep the author's note separate from the story. but otherwise, I LOVE IT!
aliviamaria aliviamaria May 04, 2013
Cover: 10/10 
                              Plot: 10/10 
                              Pace: 10/10 
                              Character development: 10/10 
                              Improvements: Ha-ha. this is so funny! I love the idea of a cat narrating it, it's so unique. I think your writing style is perfect and the pace is right were it should be(: Great job! Voted!
hopedonuts hopedonuts May 04, 2013
@Aarya1357 Haha it's fine xD Thanks for the review! :3 (And the vote)
hopedonuts hopedonuts May 04, 2013
@AgentBoredom Gah I'm stuck between the two! I'll probably flick between them. I don't really know if I'm gonna make this humourous enough :3