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Runaway Fiancée

Runaway Fiancée

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WrittenOnRaindrops By WrittenOnRaindrops Updated May 26, 2015

Amélie is a teenage orphan, well, sort of. The only family she has left is Vivienne, her flippant step mother. If that weren't bad enough, the clock is ticking for her to either wed or forfeit her family's estate to a distant cousin. Things start to look up when Vivienne agrees to introduce her to society, but she soon learns that everyone has a hidden agenda. Will keeping her home mean losing herself?

LoveYouDarling LoveYouDarling May 14, 2014
I thought this was really funny! Other than a couple quotation things, I saw no issue with it at all! :)
tabidesu tabidesu Dec 18, 2012
@WrittenOnRaindrops Ooh that sounds like it'll be fun to write.  And you're welcome :) lol.
WrittenOnRaindrops WrittenOnRaindrops Jan 10, 2012
Thanks. I'm trying to walk the line between fantasy and reality, so I thought I'd throw in just a hint of fairy tale. And yeah, Vivian is like the evil step mother and the bratty step sisters all rolled into one.
SJWist SJWist May 20, 2011
Witty and funny, this has me hooked so far.  I can see Vivian being a major problem later on if this is just the start to her wickedness.  I agree with Tevase on the ending to this part--it's perfect.
Tevase Tevase Oct 07, 2010
i love that little bit at the end 
                              i hope you write more of this