(My "naughty little "Spy) Rated R!!

(My "naughty little "Spy) Rated R!!

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Hosier38 By Hosier38 Updated Jan 02

I watch him threw the crack in the door. He's behind my sister who's on all fours. He magnificent to watch! His black hair was glistening wet. His chest was rushing in and out from his labored breathing and his electric Blue eyes were a deep almost black with his needs. I can't help but be turned on by what I see. Beth cry's of pleasure made me jealous!.. They were turn to were Beth was facing the wall but Zander could still see the door. My own breathing turns labored. I hadn't realized I'd moan out that loud until Zander turned to look at me standing there "watching. He never stopped. With my sister as his eyes locked with mine. A knowing smirk turned up the corner of his beautiful lips. I couldn't help but lick my suddenly dry lips. I hadn't thought his eyes could get any  darker then they were right now. But I was wrong! So wrong. They so could. "Raw Need" like I've never seen before, turns them black. Oh! My I whimper out. As he licks his on lips at me. His eyes locked with mine.

Hosier38 Hosier38 Sep 06, 2016
Lol! No she seen him at party's. Sorry for not clearing that up.
thicocoqueen thicocoqueen Sep 05, 2016
Hold uppp do u live across of him or in his closet or something
kaaykoi kaaykoi Jul 31, 2016
Seems like you have a really great concept but you really need to proof read especially with all these useless and unnecessary quotation marks. Just a little proofreading and this could be great.
thicocoqueen thicocoqueen Sep 05, 2016
If you edited this it would be sooo much better because it's already really food just needs a bit of tlc