The Fire We Make

The Fire We Make

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charlie By starbucksaddict Updated 6 days ago

"We can fall in love without destroying each other. We can fall in love without having to change. But the thing is you're too stubborn and I'm too afraid. In the end, we'll only erupt into flames."

Hollyn Mitchell always dreamt of having the perfect life: the perfect job, the perfect guy and the perfect home and for awhile she had all of this. However, what she didn't expect was for her life to be turned upside down in the blink of an eye. With a hardened heart and her feisty attitude, she has to find a way to support her younger brother. 

She never in a million years would've imagined meeting her match. Sexy, brooding and very disciplined Kaiden Lann thinks he's got her all figured out: a typical city girl with not a care in the world. But what happens when her feistiness and his need for discipline collide? Do opposites really attract or will they burn each other far more than when they met?

- - Jan 09, 2016
Well holy ganoli <---made up word! This is an amazingly written first chapter to a story and I can't wait to read more. I'm going to read a few more chapters then add it to my list. xx
KayleeTheWriter KayleeTheWriter Jan 08, 2016
Ahah...I love hollyn's character, she is like a badass and I love girls like her...you captured me into reading it more...I love it
llOctoberll llOctoberll Dec 23, 2015
Wow.  I love you u started it off it was very strong.  And honestly  you kept me interested which rearly  happens to me now and gave my a few ideas for my own book.
xWritingWonderlandx xWritingWonderlandx Dec 23, 2015
Beautiful writing! The first chapter is compelling and your writing flows very nicely . I love your characters so far and keep up the good work.  :)
_debsyy _debsyy Dec 22, 2015
I like how you introduce the characters personality really quickly and make them stand out. The blurb gives an interesting view to the story and im eager to see where this is going to go :D
- - Dec 22, 2015
Hahahaha I want my kids to be like these two xD so far so good! I like where you're going with this, especially with the fierce main character haha