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Lauren Jones By lozzykiwi Completed

What would you do if your mind created a random telepathic link to one person, who you were then connected to for the rest of your life? But you must keep it a secret, or your life is in danger...

For 17 year old Benna Denman, it's hard enough being the president's daughter. And when she develops a telepathic Link, life gets even worse. Her father isn't impressed with this new evolutionary ability. It means he could lose control over people's communications - in a world without cell phones, publicly accessible internet, or a postal service, it's difficult for dissent to spread and uprising to organize. That's just the way he likes it. 

So when the government starts offering cash in exchange for these telepaths, and Benna is under suspicion by both her boyfriend and her powerful father, she knows she's in trouble. Upon discovering that the cold Dr. Frenchwood plans to use her as a lab rat to develop a cure for telepathy, Benna and her Link, a boy named Corin, decide to try to run...

This first chapter really drew me in! Your description is great.
Duchisaurus Duchisaurus Aug 25
Ooohh, an interesting start! And so well written. I can't wait to read more ^^
This chapter was very well written!
                              It is such a cool concept! There are not really any errors I can comment on. So really nice job! And I love the characters names!!
mignoncobra mignoncobra Nov 10
I loved your summary so I had to read the first chapter. Worth it! Really good. I'm going to keep reading. :)
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Tegan1311 Tegan1311 Nov 01
A great, succint opening that creates good intrigue. I 💜 your descriptions, the way you have Benna look at the wind chimes.