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Lauren Jones By lozzykiwi Completed

For 17 year old Benna Denman, it's hard enough being the president's daughter. And when she develops a telepathic Link, life gets even worse. Her father isn't impressed with this new evolutionary ability. It means he could lose control over people's communications - in a world without cell phones, publicly accessible internet, or a postal service, it's difficult for dissent to spread and uprising to organize. That's just the way he likes it. 

So when the government starts offering cash in exchange for these telepaths, and Benna is under suspicion by both her boyfriend and her powerful father, she knows she's in trouble. Upon discovering that the cold Dr. Frenchwood plans to use her as a lab rat to develop a cure for telepathy, Benna and her Link, a boy named Corin, decide to try to run...

First place for best fantasy/sci fi in @Gossamersilverglow's Best Fiction Competition 2016
Best Female Character @Gossamersilverglow's Best Fiction Competition 2016
Made to it the Elite Eight of @Fantasci's The Chosen One Competition 2016/17

Liking the flow of the story even though its just the first chappy😉
Hello lozzykiwi youre welcome, I sent you a message here cause there have been a problem on my email so yeah haha hope to read more of your stories^_^.
1Mystrian 1Mystrian Apr 17
Fascinating intro. Makes one wonder though about the future of these kids I'd the could ever love anyone else other than their linked.  Would be rather distracting.
Alva_Eriksson Alva_Eriksson Nov 07, 2016
This first chapter really drew me in! Your description is great.
- - Dec 20, 2016
Overall, this is a great start. I love how you introduce the main character and I want to find out more about her and the boy she is linked with.  On to the next chapter ...
mignoncobra mignoncobra Nov 10, 2016
I loved your summary so I had to read the first chapter. Worth it! Really good. I'm going to keep reading. :)