My Sister's Demon

My Sister's Demon

12 Part Story 13.5K Reads 272 Votes
KiKi By MySilverTouch Updated Apr 21

My name is Monica Johnson. If you would notice, my life is pretty great.Great friends, Two Loving Parents, an annoying little sister. Yea life is pretty normal for me, that is until this summer. Instead of going to our summerhouse in Florida, we end up in an abandoned cabin instead.
Which is apparently haunted, not to mention that after a few days of staying, we discover we a poltergeist. But thats not even the worse part, after viciously attacking and killing our parents, a war wolf chases my sister and I down into the woods. Follow me through my extreme adventures, where there will be Anger, Triumph, Trust, Loss, Jealousy and possibly even, Love?

MySilverTouch MySilverTouch Nov 15, 2012 01:04AM
@misguided_angel Lol, this is the prologue, meaning this happens later on the story, silly girl :P
_cryptic _cryptic Nov 13, 2012 01:13AM
what.
                               o NO you did not just cut it off like that. Awesome name "whisper" er er this could use some editing but im reading on. cause im confused on how your going to write a story on a dead girl.. unless shes a ghost :o
BfdBadGirlYo BfdBadGirlYo Aug 08, 2012 05:07PM
DIED?!!! HOLY SHIZZLE...Wait Thas Some Joke Right..Surely They Can't Die...*Closes Eyes And Clicks ''Chapter One''* Here Goes....
MySilverTouch MySilverTouch Apr 12, 2012 12:54AM
@Sharlay awww and I was looking forward to your future comments :(
Sharlay Sharlay Apr 12, 2012 12:15AM
Love the shocking start where you immediately find out that they die! So far so good, don't think I can read anymore this late I'm too much of a chicken lolol xx
SincerelyJune SincerelyJune Apr 11, 2012 05:23PM
I like the name Whisper it's so different and original, anyway this was good but maybe more details? overall I liked it.