The Alpha Female (Book One of The Alpha series)

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Natasha By TashaW Completed
Teen Werewolf Luna knows that she is going to be Alpha female when she first changes, which hasn’t happened yet and she also has to find her mate. 
    She’s dealing with her inability to change and she goes to another pack for help. Max, also an Alpha begins challenging her ability to be a female alpha while not being able to change into a wolf. 
    Both have strong personalities and what happens when two alpha’s clash? It can only mean that one has to lose, or fall in love first.
    *Warning, there will be swearing throughout*
I do this every morning with my dog who is currently laying on my chest 
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I literally just read this as shit instead of shift and I was pretty confused.
This is really good :)
                                    despite a few grammatical errors, but they can be easily sorted - I loved it. 
                                    :D x
This is a good idea. You might want to work on the spacing between the paragraphs, and also, in a few places, you need to add commas. I wish I could read more now, but I will add it to my library and come back later. Voted!
I love this story I couldn't stop reading....p.s. I love the cover!!!!!!!!!!!! hahahaha voted!
Luna sounds a bit immature but I am sure that as the story progresses she will grow up