Their Secret, Now Ours

Their Secret, Now Ours

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xXChocoCrazeXx By xXChocoCrazeXx Updated Jul 07, 2011

Myra Colton, an eighteen year old, down-to-earth girl from San Francisco who just got accepted into New York’s Brooklyn College convinces her mother to let her go to New York ahead of the scheduled time. She was supposed to go and stay with her Aunt Fay in January, when her classes began, but she wants to go earlier to get used to the idea of living in New York once again. Her problems rise when she notices the strange family next door, whom Aunt Fay recalls as "nice people". No matter what her Aunt says, Myra is positive there's something off about that family...especially with that weird, gloomy son of theirs with who she immediately starts off the wrong foot with.

Dan Remington, youngest of three sons and two daughters, known as the "loner" of the family. Though a loner, his love for his family is well-known and he would do anything for his family even at the cost of his life. Amongst the already amount of stress on his lap, more stress is thrown on him when the neighbor's niece starts getting suspicious about his family, and he's not about to let her find out.........

xXChocoCrazeXx xXChocoCrazeXx Nov 12, 2010
@-Lucinda- no! You're writing is amazing as well! Thank you so much for the compliment, means a lot to me! =)
xXChocoCrazeXx xXChocoCrazeXx Oct 29, 2010
@Akari_chan......I'm glad you like it so far Akari!! and yeah i've become pretty fond of Myra and her name =)
xXChocoCrazeXx xXChocoCrazeXx Oct 13, 2010
@IrisDane Oh i see, never thought of that  =) thanks for the feedback! ^^
xXChocoCrazeXx xXChocoCrazeXx Oct 08, 2010
@fairy_tale Thanks!! I'll check out your story once i get home later on today =)
xXChocoCrazeXx xXChocoCrazeXx Oct 08, 2010
@xxcrimsonxshellxx Thanks! I appreciate you reading my story so far and commenting =) I will read one of your stories as a thank you =)
antheias antheias Oct 08, 2010
It's a pretty good first chapter, and 'Myra' is a nice name ^-^ And the description sounds interesting. :D 
                              
                              Keep it up :D