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The mafia leader loves me

The mafia leader loves me

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Weird unicorn By weirdlybeautiful_02 Updated Nov 06, 2015

I don't love him, I can't! He's a monster. I love another, but that obviously isn't going to stop him. I've left him signs, clues, hints, clearing saying I hate him. But does he care? No. He won't stop until I'm his. But, Id rather die then be called his. But then again...things change.

untouched25 untouched25 Aug 02, 2016
Instead of using so much personal pronoun you should try something else and write 
                              She replies, I uttered,I intervene you know instead of I said I said all the time
gudekarpranali gudekarpranali Dec 23, 2016
U should improve ur skills ....the story doesn't go smooth with what is written
gudekarpranali gudekarpranali Dec 23, 2016
Where does she get a hint that he is a mafai ????? U r taking the story too fast