The mafia leader loves me

The mafia leader loves me

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Weird unicorn By weirdlybeautiful_02 Updated Nov 06, 2015

I don't love him, I can't! He's a monster. I love another, but that obviously isn't going to stop him. I've left him signs, clues, hints, clearing saying I hate him. But does he care? No. He won't stop until I'm his. But, Id rather die then be called his. But then again...things change.

Dyeni_5 Dyeni_5 May 10
Who cares! I've put my limit to being no more than 5 years older than me 6 if I really love him so he just about makes it!! Let's get to falling in love😍😍😍😍
untouched25 untouched25 Aug 02, 2016
Instead of using so much personal pronoun you should try something else and write 
                              She replies, I uttered,I intervene you know instead of I said I said all the time
gudekarpranali gudekarpranali Dec 23, 2016
U should improve ur skills ....the story doesn't go smooth with what is written
gudekarpranali gudekarpranali Dec 23, 2016
Where does she get a hint that he is a mafai ????? U r taking the story too fast