Bound To You

Bound To You

28.4K Reads 1.3K Votes 22 Part Story
IIJayII By IIJayIILovesBooks Updated 3 days ago

Highest Ranking: #210 in Werewolf
  
  First Place Winner for The People's Choice of Best Werewolf Book in the Rose Awards
  
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  She noticed and admired the man sitting behind a large chestnut desk, he was dressed in a fitted white button-up shirt, his bulky muscles prominent under the shirt, her eyes gazed upon his short thick luscious raven hair combed uniformly, and his suave sun-kissed olive tanned skin she wanted to feel on hers so badly.
      
    His narrow nose was accentuated by his sharp cheekbones that rested high on his face. His prominent jawline stood strong and peaked sharpness had light stubble. The lips of this proclaimed angel of her's was full and tinted pink.
      
      She looked up and her eyes narrowed in to his striking steely grey eyes fringed by his thick eyelashes that flickered against his cheeks ever so often.
      
      His eyes narrowed in on hers too and in the mystification she realized that this man was her mate.
    
   When she realizes who he, she does not want him for what he did to her.  However with all the challenges she faces he seems to be there for her.
  Her choices affect him immensely but her negligence to his emotions will come with consequences.
    
    Will he forgive her? Will she forgive him?
      
             ~ A King Only Bows Down To His Queen ~

Geekasauruz Geekasauruz Nov 20
I'm loving this paragraph so far, but this tiny bit doesn't flow right. Maybe 'with' instead of had might be a quick fix, or adding 'that' before stood strong may get the flow going again. Still a great paragraph nonetheless :)
Hadear98 Hadear98 Aug 14
I am in tears bc of the littel movie and I don't even know why !! I think I'll love this story !
Geekasauruz Geekasauruz Nov 20
I love the intro so far, very striking :) but this part here seems a little odd, I think it would read better if there was an 'is' at the end of 'who he' it was probably just a minor overlook :)
A simple sweet love story :') Awwh, I'm looking forward to reading
Pink_Speaks Pink_Speaks Aug 17
I like that you have that intro. People like to get right to the story so that's good that it's short.
Omg that movie brought tears to my eyes!! I was so interested and slightly confused but once I got it, it hit me hard 😭😭😭 but it was still pretty cute.