The Best Of Me (editing)

The Best Of Me (editing)

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lala1333 By lala1333 Completed

Going to North Carolina Charlie was not planning to find the girl of his dreams. Taylor has had a hard life, but when she meets Charlie things start to turn around. As the summer goes on they both learn things that affect their relationship. At the end of the summer Charlie will be going to boot camp, while Taylor will go back and finish her senior year. While Charlie is gone Taylor hides a big secret from him. When Charlie returns home three years later, he also has a surprise for Taylor.

  • abortion
  • abuse
  • army
  • attacked
  • carolina
  • charlie
  • death
  • exboyfriend
  • north
  • sick
  • son
  • summer
  • taylor
  • years
4575009me 4575009me 2 days ago
So the words in the book are really good, however, you have a lot of run sentence fragments and also run on sentence
lydiaskira lydiaskira Jul 13, 2016
This conversation is kinda hard to follow if we don't know who's talking😕😐
PaygeJohnson PaygeJohnson Jun 22, 2016
When I read "My dad was a stiff.." I automatically thought of divergent.. Anyone else??