Broken Mistake

Broken Mistake

10.7K Reads 123 Votes 15 Part Story
Rick By OMGguyLOL Completed

(When life forbid you to remember, will you fight it or let it be?)
14 years old, Bianca with a boy named Jasper were in love so deep. They thought nothing could get in their ways, but they were wrong... Big time..
Drown yourself inside this heart-broken romance, or forever hold your peace...

JackBJ JackBJ Dec 15, 2012
"Let's make the most of the night like we're gonna die young" =)
ON3PI3C3 ON3PI3C3 Dec 11, 2010
Memory lost?!?!?! Oh my god!! It's getting better and better 
ON3PI3C3 ON3PI3C3 Dec 11, 2010
%uE107what happen!!!%uE107 oh my god this is sooo good, u turn it to funny, sad, and WTF in one little page. A round of a plause. U got me hook %uE409
KAFrak KAFrak Nov 23, 2010
I'll never do that, not I
                              
                              Remove the 6AM thing, I just don't like that moving exactly away at 6 thing
                              
                              You pack a lot into one chapter..if this was an action movie, everything would be blowing up during the opening credits. I need to read more before I can judge
                              
                              
Daisie Daisie Nov 20, 2010
omg, What happened??
                              Did she get shot??
                              Omg, I'm Actually Hooked.
SmileMyLove SmileMyLove Oct 29, 2010
It's short. So not sure how to feel on it.
                              Going to read the next chapter :]