the breeder

the breeder

19.6K Reads 440 Votes 4 Part Story
kevinswife By kevinswife Updated Sep 20, 2015

Larina swinson is 16 & just found out she's the pack breeder she will keep their pack populated with pups are so her pack thinks when she becomes pregnant with her first litter her cousin and only family member helps her get away Toby carter is 20 with two pups he's the alpha of the worlds biggest most feared pack the silver flames pack he's been waiting for his mate since 16 & his pups are from a one night stand with a human when Larina is found by his delta they learn their mates he vows to protect her and raise her pups as his

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hugwen hugwen Jan 31, 2018
It looks like your still in your first draft. 😔 I was so looking forwards to an awesome story. I truly think this has the ability to be awesome. However, I feel you just need to work on it some more. 😊
MarleyC47 MarleyC47 Feb 03, 2017
You have a good idea for a story, but no punctuation or capital letters when required makes for a difficult read.
mjrses659 mjrses659 Feb 24, 2017
Excape?? Omg I'm hoping that it's some kind of joke I missed
Lighthouse60 Lighthouse60 Sep 26, 2018
The first chapter is good, but needed a little bit more details. Loving the plot those.
Quatainia Quatainia Jul 18, 2018
You need to use punctuation or no one is going to read this, no offense.