The Swarm

The Swarm

6 Part Story 1.2K Reads 30 Votes
John By whaa97 Updated Sep 24, 2011

A tiny village is infested with a virus, and scientists from america go to investigate, but when they are all killed mysteriously they bring something home far more dangerous.

NotePadmin NotePadmin Dec 25, 2012 03:17AM
I'm not sure how I felt about the beginning, it didn't really drag me in. Great concept, perhaps check it over. Also a bit repetitive at the beginning. "He was, he had..."
NotePadmin NotePadmin Dec 25, 2012 03:16AM
I'm not sure how I felt about the beginning, it didn't really drag me in. Great concept, perhaps check it over.
whaa97 whaa97 Sep 02, 2011 02:04AM
@podina they were just.... uninteresting, more fun with what i was gona do with the guys.
pam pam Sep 01, 2011 06:14PM
Ahhh I knew it! I didn't expect people to die this soon though.
pam pam Sep 01, 2011 06:08PM
How come you gave a physical description of the boys, but not the girls? Just wondering. :P It makes me think that you're probably gonna kill off the girls in the story first.