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Danielle brown By Danielle373458 Completed

" don't you get it, you're a slave nothing more" he screamed in my face. 

I shook in fear, " get off" I said, his hands tightened on my upper arms. " I am not a slave" I screamed.

he growled.

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  #16 in Vampire     

    May 13, 2016

Ugh, this book seems really awesome, but it needs a lot of editing...sorry, it just bothers me because I'm used to picking mistakes out and they pop out a me 😬 really great start to the book though, I know at I'm gonna enjoy the story!
Semesta sounds like a disease or a gangster trying to say semester. 😂😂
Maybe cause the man she trusted and loves, her very own father.. Sold her..
First, this is a fantastic cover... can't wait to read the chapter...
Starred of? Okay, either your autocorrect is off-the-wire crazy, or you're still in kindergarten. I'm not trying to be mean, but seriously, at least proofread your stories!