The war was over now they can have a normal time in school...... like if its never normal in Hogwarts.
Draco has a gift and a curse, he wants something he gets it and it seems the thing Draco wants Hermione cause what a Malfoy want they take.
capitalize Granger. ... hooked. Crash ! Jumping(Capitalize J) New sentence... OK This sentence is just wrong.. rewrite or just leave this sentence out...
I JUST NOTICED
H.G. = head girl
H.G. = H.ERMIONE G.RANGER
Whining is correct...
You're. = You. Are. (You're a veela)
Your. = that is yours...
I know u said sorry for spelling but it's bothering me. Her name is Narcissa
Not criticizing only suggesting, use Spell & Grammar Check.
Does anyone else notice how H.G. Stands for Head Girl and Hermione Granger