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1.1M Reads 25K Votes 23 Part Story
Li Dang By HappiLi Completed

He was afraid of the storms in her eyes, but somehow, they were meant to be.

[ warning: my writing was a complete disaster in 2013. read at your own risk. ]

I love the way you described it- I'll definetely continue reading, but it should be, "looked" as you're talking in past tense.
batmanbosssuperpimp batmanbosssuperpimp Aug 23, 2016
Once I was seven years old my mama told me something that I don't remember
IHeartSarcasm23 IHeartSarcasm23 Sep 16, 2016
FOR THE FIRST TIME IN FOREVER 
                              *cue the frozen lyrics*
                              A STORY THAT THE MAIN CHARACTER IS A BOY
In_the_moon_light In_the_moon_light Oct 24, 2015
oh my gosh, I'm hooked already! I love your description, it gives me a perfect image in my head. A few grammar issues, though. Just wanted to point that out since it says you're editing it. (:
daywolf daywolf Jul 09, 2015
This is a good story the ending has very interested love this story
kaityC1999 kaityC1999 Sep 15, 2014
That prologue sounds very similar to the shiver series like very similar