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The Undercover Streetfighter✔ {Under Editing}

The Undercover Streetfighter✔ {Under Editing}

793K Reads 25.8K Votes 38 Part Story
Pakhi Goel By ashthunder123 Completed

        Ashley Winster, an alternate persona of what the world expects her to be. One who never follows rules, skips detentions, and shoots up rude comebacks. Always having her father to encourage her, her mother whenever needed and her loving ten-year-old brother was enough to complete the needs of her life.
        Now that her mother was on her deathbed and her father being professionally redundant, Ashley relies on her passion for earning her family a living.
        Will she be able to take care of her brother without him knowing about all of her dark secrets? Will she be able to protect him?
        She's disguised in a boy's attire.
        She's in her skirts.
        And she's in her gloves.
        Cover made by the wonderful @forcade
        Highest rank: #1 in action - 18/03/2016

VDanonymousKC VDanonymousKC 2 days ago
I wouldn't worry about it if I were you. If people like your book, they'll understand and be patient. You do you.
You are a really good writer for an eleven year old. I k kt that I'm  going to enjoy this book. Good luck with your other book
smartdog142 smartdog142 Jul 07
Is it just me, or did anyone else notice that the word 'with' repeats twice after smile?
Wow you were 11 when you wrote this!? Your an amazing writer! ❤️
what do they think when they insult ppl. who do they think they are to insult others
You never know how much something truly means to you until you lose it.