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mixed feelings - An Amourshipping Story

mixed feelings - An Amourshipping Story

38.1K Reads 895 Votes 22 Part Story
Shiny_Dunsparce By Shiny_Dunsparce Completed

the xy gang has now finished travelling all of the kalos region, and ash is now ready to challenge league. serena, ashs childhood friend has mixed feelings about this and she tries to persuade ash from challenging the league because she is afraid that her crush might just return back to the kanto region after battling the league.

Livien467 Livien467 Jun 16
Me and clemont are the same exept with the sibling stuff, both viewed as smart not athletic AT ALL (lungs weak from bronchitis a bunch) and gets tired very easy
- - Apr 27, 2016
good story, might want to work on small things like grammar and sentence structure
Clemont is me, blonde hair, not exactly athletic (I'm asthmatic), (I don't actually know, what colour eyes does Clemont have) one difference is, I don't wear glasses
You need to work out how to use punctuation. Other than that its really good
Shiny_Dunsparce Shiny_Dunsparce Sep 19, 2015
Thanks @Typovo ..... Ill try too add more chapters as soon as i can
Shiny_Dunsparce Shiny_Dunsparce Sep 18, 2015
Not really sure of wht you mean there @KendrickClarence but thanks for the compliment