Force

Force

15.7K Reads 333 Votes 17 Part Story
Katie ryan By katie1184 Updated Jan 23, 2016

Sitting here in a white revealing $10,000 wedding dress was never in my plan, how did I get here?

Laura has always dreamed of a white wedding just not with a guy like him or in any of these circumstances. Laura is normal aside from the fact her brother has just been diagnosed with leukemia She is alone and poor without a parents she goes to the extreme to help her brother.

BBblueOkoro BBblueOkoro 9 hours ago
I'm sorry, I don't mean to be mean. But I know I'm gonna love this book. Definitely!!!
BBblueOkoro BBblueOkoro 9 hours ago
Uhmmmmm......  I don't like the start. But it's OK, guess we in for a great book.
MrsGoogle MrsGoogle Feb 24
why is an x-ray needed if he is vomiting. did he swallow a marble.
Um very fast paced and alot of errors and makes me want to edit this entire chapter possibly making things more believable and smoother. However I'm holding out on believing you'll be doing a full on editing after you've completed throwing out thr things on your mind