We play with Toys,
We love Toys,
We kill with Toys,
We are The ToyMakers.
not scared not scared 😅😰
u made it really well ..... best wishes
How about instead of "But I was not..." To "So I wasn't shocked..."
I think there is suppose to be a comma separating "snowing" and "I", like " snowing, I "
I don't think the comma in-between "Everyone" and "needs" needs to be there, it's like a random pause, but you can leave it there if you want
Wait does the trailer only go with the book, or is it also an anime or animes??? Cuz it looks AWESOME and I can't read anything but English and a little french. Lol.
I think it would be better if you delete the "As" in the beginning of the sentence and just start it with "She smiled.." Because having it there would be a little confusing and a bit repetitive. But you can leave it there if you want.