Lizzie Borden's Revenge

Lizzie Borden's Revenge

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Kelly By LittleKattyKat Completed

Lizzie Borden had an axe, gave her mother forty whacks.  When she saw what she had done, she gave her father forty one.  We all know the rhyme, but what you've never heard is the terrible fate of ten children, chanting it rhyme while jumping rope in the schoolyard, on a brisk fall day in 1930...

bubblegum-ash bubblegum-ash Apr 26, 2015
OMG YEEEESSS IVE BEEN LOOKING FOR A LIZZIE BORDEN STORY FOR SO LONG
sefwheart sefwheart Apr 13, 2015
wow umm I don't know about that... have you looked at the trial parts? She was acquitted on the murder charge.
KaylynnMcclelland KaylynnMcclelland Jun 13, 2014
i know sh ekilled her parent no lie in lizzie i know you were lauphin  on top of then dang stiars
YoshiGee YoshiGee Oct 05, 2012
Wow that was amazing!!!!!! loved it....... I wish there was mpre to read ;o
The_Jinxed_Fox The_Jinxed_Fox Mar 11, 2012
As soon as I saw the words 'Lizzie Borden took...' I had to click on it. I love that rhyme and I used to do exactly that; chant it while skipping with my friends. This is an awesome story!
LittleKattyKat LittleKattyKat Oct 06, 2010
It's fine, thanks for reviewing!
                              
                              I can honestly say that this is the most messed up thing I've ever written, and I'm not sure how I would continue it.  I'll run it by my friend (who also has a messed up mind) and see if she has any ideas.  Feel free to give me any if you have them!  Thanks again!