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Retired

Retired

216K Reads 16.1K Votes 76 Part Story
Grim Horus By GrimThor3 Completed

Newly retired from the imperial army after serving 60 years,  Drake Daemon wishes for a peaceful, ordinary life. However, a villain from the past, forces him to face what he left behind in order to save everyone he loves.

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Highest Ranking: 2th in Science-Fiction

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"Hey man, 'Retired' is such a great book! I love it so much, I stayed up until 4 am (my classes start at 6) reading it ... Twice!"
-SPARTANMAN114

"Really well done interesting story... I finished all but the last chapter in one sitting. Nice to be retired."
-Dale0505

"He kept getting hit in the left shoulder lol."
-PeterMcnemar

"Hopefully you write a sequel this was absolutely amazing."
-Peter Mcnemar

"Well written well paced."
-Aleonos

"This is the best written story I've read on this site."
-straightguy

"I think I am falling in love with this book ... You have done wonders to this book and I absolutely love it"
-facemaker123

"We all just want peace, sometimes the price is too high... then those that can take it to those who would disrupt the peace."
-relon45

Malantor Malantor Jul 04, 2016
This has the same wording and feel as a best-selling author!
IgnisWriting IgnisWriting Dec 24, 2016
The story is good, but it just doesn't read very easy. Your sentences are confusing and I would proof read it more if I were you.
GaryHanson GaryHanson Feb 11, 2016
Liked that you used the "Worst starting line in writing, It was a dark and stormy night".
ShadeSlayer07 ShadeSlayer07 Nov 09, 2016
Read this book about 6-7 months ago really loved it. Now I can't find any other good sci-fi story's on here il check out the sequel though
NewUsernameIs NewUsernameIs Aug 24, 2016
My sis made an story that was IT WAS AN COLD STORMY NIGHT AN I RAN INTO AN WALL THEN POFF A SAY POOF A SAY★_{
clay58333 clay58333 Feb 02, 2016
that was a great start love it and can anybody read my little story well summary and see how it is please and follow me ill follow back