Valterra: Death Awakens - The Primordial Series (Book One)

Valterra: Death Awakens - The Primordial Series (Book One)

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Katie Flynn By ktflynn Completed

The Shattering, a cataclysmic battle between the Light and Dark, left most of Valterra's civilization obliterated. Almost five hundred years later, the Dark disrupts the elemental balance of nature once again.
        
        Avos, a sheltered farm boy who is oblivious to any of the world's unearthly dangers, is thrown into the world unseen; witches, elves, fairies, demons, even the undead. He struggles to accept his new fate, while discovering new relationships and preparing for the precipice of the campaign against the Dark.

Very interesting prologue. No wonder why this book got featured. Good job!
amzolt amzolt May 03, 2016
Nice intro---kept the mystery up while still revealing enough to make this reader turn the page :-)
Wandering_Bard Wandering_Bard Jun 16, 2016
Oh, I have a feeling deep within that this is going to be a good one...
berryboba berryboba Sep 10, 2016
 #NBR
                              
                              Question 1: Yes it did! I was able to vividly picture pretty much everything that happened. The only thing I had little hard time imagining was his walk back home and the where his farm/trenches/crops was....but I normally have a hard time envisioning setting, so that could just be me.
bubba_bree bubba_bree Apr 22, 2016
Your exposition and world building was fleshed it so well. The way you set up your atmosphere is well..mesmerizing. And wow, I wonder what power Avos has. The ability to control the weather?
writervid writervid Sep 09, 2016
This should be split up into two sentences, or a semicolon should be used instead of a comma.