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Valterra: The Primordial Series (Book One)

Valterra: The Primordial Series (Book One)

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Katie Flynn By ktflynn Completed

A Wattpad Featured Story.
    The Shattering, a cataclysmic battle between the Factions of Light and Dark, left most of Valterra's civilization obliterated. Now, almost five hundred years later, the end of All looms as the Great Dark disrupts the elemental balance of nature once again.
    Hope lives within Avos, a sheltered farm boy who is oblivious to any of the world's unearthly dangers. He meets Chancellor Marcus Thane, who introduces him to the world unseen; witches, elves, fairies, demons, even the undead. Avos struggles to accept his new fate, while discovering new relationships and preparing for the precipice of the campaign against the Light.

ProjectPr1de ProjectPr1de 7 days ago
Very interesting prologue. No wonder why this book got featured. Good job!
amzolt amzolt May 03, 2016
Nice intro---kept the mystery up while still revealing enough to make this reader turn the page :-)
Wandering_Bard Wandering_Bard Jun 16, 2016
Oh, I have a feeling deep within that this is going to be a good one...
bluebrryboba bluebrryboba Sep 10, 2016
                              Question 1: Yes it did! I was able to vividly picture pretty much everything that happened. The only thing I had little hard time imagining was his walk back home and the where his farm/trenches/crops was....but I normally have a hard time envisioning setting, so that could just be me.
bubba_bree bubba_bree Apr 22, 2016
Your exposition and world building was fleshed it so well. The way you set up your atmosphere is well..mesmerizing. And wow, I wonder what power Avos has. The ability to control the weather?
writervid writervid Sep 09, 2016
This should be split up into two sentences, or a semicolon should be used instead of a comma.