Valterra: The Primordial Series (Book One)

Valterra: The Primordial Series (Book One)

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Kate By ktflynn Completed

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  The Shattering, a cataclysmic battle between the Factions of Light and Dark, left most of Valterra's civilization obliterated. Now, almost five hundred years later, the end of All looms as the Great Dark disrupts the elemental balance of nature once again.
  
  Hope lives within Avos, a sheltered farm boy who is oblivious to any of the world's unearthly dangers. He meets Chancellor Marcus Thane, who introduces him to the world unseen; witches, elves, fairies, demons, even the undead. Avos struggles to accept his new fate, while discovering new relationships and preparing for the precipice of the campaign against the Light.

amzolt amzolt May 03
Nice intro---kept the mystery up while still revealing enough to make this reader turn the page :-)
Oh, I have a feeling deep within that this is going to be a good one...
 #NBR
                              
                              Question 1: Yes it did! I was able to vividly picture pretty much everything that happened. The only thing I had little hard time imagining was his walk back home and the where his farm/trenches/crops was....but I normally have a hard time envisioning setting, so that could just be me.
bubba_bree bubba_bree Apr 22
Your exposition and world building was fleshed it so well. The way you set up your atmosphere is well..mesmerizing. And wow, I wonder what power Avos has. The ability to control the weather?
writervid writervid Sep 09
This should be split up into two sentences, or a semicolon should be used instead of a comma.
Mirthe Mirthe Apr 10
Hello there! :D I noticed you started a lot of sentences with 'but'. Maybe you didnt notice that while editing? I hope you dont mind me commenting this! If you do just say so and I'll shutup hahaha