Princess in Blood //EDITING

Princess in Blood //EDITING

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PrincessPlus By PrincessPlus Completed

The chains of despair with no desires or wishes, guided by the blood of her family in torpor dreams of death; Emilia, a 18-year-old girl who lived her normal life alongside those in the mundane world.
  
  Until one day, everything changes.
  
  Stolen from her comfortable lifestyle, her obsessive past unmask themselves claiming to be her family. Learning the true origins of herself, what lies beyond the lifestyle with a blood soaked crown and emerging instincts that are involved with finding a mate.
  
  {   Edited by Suica_   }

  • blood
  • crazy
  • family
  • fantasy
  • human
  • hunter
  • hybrid
  • king
  • love
  • mate
  • mysterious
  • prince
  • princess
  • romance
  • royal
  • slave
  • soulmate
  • supernatural
  • vampire
  • vampirehunter
EragonNarniaLOFTRs EragonNarniaLOFTRs Jan 18, 2016
A good effort in starting a story. However, it does need polishing up and spacing in between paragraphs would be nice. I did notice a few grammatical errors and lacking in descriptions. If you went and added descriptions and fixed what needs editing, you'll have a perfect opening chapter!