Hurt

Hurt

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Renee💕 By ren_bear Completed

This book is mostly teen fiction using the characters from my favourite series, Divergent. Most of my story isn't based off of the plot of Divergent. Just a little heads up before you guys read it. 

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"I..." I start averting my eye.
  He grabs my chin to force me to look at him.
  "Tris,"he demands.
  "Ok fine. I have a history of... Depression. You know cutting, and uhh... Suicide,"I say the last part quietly but I know he heard.
 "Oh Tris,"he says looking sad. He gathers me into his arms.
  I smell his scent and force back my tears.
  "Don't do this to yourself,"he whispers, "You don't deserve this."
  I fit my head to the crook of his neck and melt into his embrace.
  "I'll try,"I whisper back knowing that I'm lying. I let out a small whimper but my voice muffled my his shirt. 
Hopefully he won't miss me much. 

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  Beatrice Prior is under stress from highschool and now bullying. She has a history of depression and attempting suicide. Its not easy for her and she seems to be slowly drifting back to her past. With a dead mother and her father desperately trying  to find a new girlfriend, Beatrice feels alone in this world. And leaving her alone may not be a great choice.

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#93 in fan fictions- 05.14.2016

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  [THIS HAS NOT BEEN GRAMMATICALLY CORRECTED YET SO BARE WITH ME FOR SPELLING/ GRAMMAR MISTAKES]

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P.S  I started writing this book at a young age so prepare for amateur writing at the beginning! Please give my book a chance I promise it gets better. 😊

AbbyRose475 AbbyRose475 Jun 29
Finally something that doesn't put The Dauntless High or whatever
Im smart, and im selfless a lot, but i live on a farm and used to be happy. So probably divergent
I have to say that the message divergent was sending is that we are all diveregent, not one person only has one trait. we are all pure
I would be erudite and candor probably. Though I am selfless at times and some people call me brave, so I would be divergent.
UniversalAsteroid UniversalAsteroid Sep 01, 2016
Mostly Amity bug i sometimes get an aptitude for Dauntless and Erudite. But I always get Amity.
MakennaKF MakennaKF Aug 02, 2016
please please PLEASE tell me you are not one of those people who thinks Chicago is a state...