Lost Memories (Being Edited)

Lost Memories (Being Edited)

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Kiara Elaine By KiaraTheLioness Completed

Iliana doesn't know who she really is.
Imprisoned for defending herself, she's given a second chance and is released. She meets other people like her in the castle, other Shapeshifters. But they have to keep their abilities secret, King Lucifer despises their kind. 
He also knows how to get her memories back.
Iliana bands together with Ash, who has a secret of his own, and four Shifters who have unique abilities like herself to try and find out how to get her memories back.
But there is a reason King Lucifer took away those memories.
Will they find out the truth before its too late?
Or will the evil that's surfacing among them destroy everything?

    KiaraTheLioness KiaraTheLioness Mar 16, 2013
    @KaeC26 Thankyou :) I think towards the end is better than the start anyway, i still need to edit this and make some changes
    KaeC26 KaeC26 Mar 14, 2013
    Yeah this is a good start you have made here. You have done well. It is a very gripping storyline. Well done:) Voted x
    KiaraTheLioness KiaraTheLioness Aug 20, 2012
    @forgottenchildren thanks! :D
                                  and i have to edit it still, so i might make it longer then, we'll see :)
    mystifique mystifique Aug 20, 2012
    Your summary really hooked me, and now this chapter is really good written and well thought out! You just should try to make it a little bit longer ;)
    KiaraTheLioness KiaraTheLioness Apr 09, 2012
    @xxGucciGuccix thanx :) and yeah, i wrote the beginning of this a while ago so its a little iffy, but im glad you enjoyed the beginning anyway :)
    KiaraTheLioness KiaraTheLioness Mar 09, 2011
    Can any new readers of this story please comment or vote
                                  I need all the support I can get:(