A Student Council Love Story

A Student Council Love Story

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detective_strawhat By detective_strawhat Updated Mar 04, 2013

What will happen when the cat and dog relationship of the student council's president and vice president turned into love? Will the student council office handle the heat and passion of young love? :]

This is a story of young love, first love and true love.Enjoy!

(I personally love the characters and the story. One of the kinds of love story I want to have. :3 )

xxtypicalscorpianxx xxtypicalscorpianxx Sep 21, 2012
i love the story its gripping the only problem i felt was the paragraphing, you leave line after every sentence, instead you should make proper paragraphs.
melonshake melonshake Sep 20, 2012
This is good stuff! I'm captivated by the lightness and cuteness of the story and the characters. I'll read this!!!!!!!!
detective_strawhat detective_strawhat Sep 18, 2012
@MusicMessenger16 Thank you for your comment. I already did some editing. :)
jcarstairs jcarstairs Sep 18, 2012
Seems really promising, I can tell the love story's going to be super cute. I would just advise you to space out your paragraphs and watch your punctuation, spelling, etc. because there were a few errors here and there. It was a decent start though, just edit =)
mypolaris12 mypolaris12 Sep 14, 2012
WOW oh WOW! This stuff is really something and promising!  I'm smiling while reading the story because the dialogues are very natural and cute. It is indeed a love story for teens and young romance! I LOVE IT SOOOOO MUCH! Good work Ms.Author! I'll read more. :))
maybella maybella Aug 05, 2012
it is well written and it makes sense, so you're a really good writer! keep on writin'