I'm in Love With a Cocky FBI Agent

I'm in Love With a Cocky FBI Agent

1.9K Reads 57 Votes 11 Part Story
lyssamarie02 By lyssamarie02 Updated May 20, 2016

Dani is a fun, loving and a adventurous girl.  Follow her in adventure of love, hate, and sadness.  As she is the only other girl in the precinct besides her best friend... She needs to be strong and independent, but most of all...
Kick Ass!!!

  • action
  • adventure
  • mafia
  • romance
msmsksaa msmsksaa Dec 06, 2017
There are so many typos and grammatical errors I don't want to read it anymore...
dilucas4444 dilucas4444 Nov 18, 2015
Sorry if that sounds mean, I'm just trying to give my honest opinion. This is really good though.
dilucas4444 dilucas4444 Nov 18, 2015
A bit confusing, but I like your style. Just try to blend it together a bit, sometimes it feels like random things brought together to create a chapter. But this is a really good attempt - it's not an attempt, you've made it to shore, but you're still in the water. Yeah?