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The Mafia's Lost Daughter

The Mafia's Lost Daughter

225K Reads 8.8K Votes 73 Part Story
Melanie Prett By littleuglyalien Updated Jul 04

Read the book to find out more about Tyler Fernandez's life.

Warning:Contains minimal mature themes so read it at your own will.Violence and vulgars are included.Undergoing major edit so do expect grammatical errors and the periods are not typed properly in some chapters.But either way,chapters will still be updated as per usual so enjoy!

MARVELGIRL1322 MARVELGIRL1322 Nov 14, 2016
I don't think 'captivated' is the right word. You might need to fix that.
                              -no hate.
jazzyjazz180 jazzyjazz180 Nov 19, 2016
may be not mabe that is like saying i may or may not be held captive
RiyhaanDurgahed RiyhaanDurgahed Nov 06, 2016
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jazzyjazz180 jazzyjazz180 Nov 19, 2016
i agree with the not using "captivated," it would be better to say held captive captivated is more of a word i would use in saying interested in a book or movie.
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John_beaver John_beaver Oct 20, 2016
Great chapter, the mafia's stories are the best! congrats for your style, I enjoyed!