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I don't think 'captivated' is the right word. You might need to fix that.
may be not mabe that is like saying i may or may not be held captive
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i agree with the not using "captivated," it would be better to say held captive captivated is more of a word i would use in saying interested in a book or movie.
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Great chapter, the mafia's stories are the best! congrats for your style, I enjoyed!