Alice's Baby girl

Alice's Baby girl

71.5K Reads 1.6K Votes 21 Part Story
punkbarbie By punkbarbie Updated Nov 09, 2017

What if Bella and Edward had twin's but Gave the other child away due to Bella only wanting one. she still loved the other child but could only care for one. Read and find out what happens to this child.

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wonderland76 wonderland76 Jun 11, 2017
That's was just hurtful for Bella to say about not wanting her daughter
Liyalove21 Liyalove21 Nov 23, 2017
I have never liked Bella because she disgraces the female race with her recklessness and stupidity. This story just made her even more of a bitch
punkbarbie punkbarbie Jun 11, 2017
I know, I personally like Bella but in this story I felt the need for her to be hurtful and B*****
Junnesejer_Tuz Junnesejer_Tuz Jan 06, 2017
And I found another piece that didn't make sense, I don't want to point out just things I find. It's a really good I just kind of want to make sure it's at it's best. When Alice said "Bella don't care" it should be "Bella doesn't care"
Junnesejer_Tuz Junnesejer_Tuz Jan 06, 2017
When you said "Paul go with her and Jacob and fix" it doesn't really sound right. I think it'd sound a bit better if you had said "Paul go with her and Jacob so you can fix the mess you made, Jared you can go help." But this is just my opinion but I thought I wanted to tell you anyhow.