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Goner | M.C.

Goner | M.C.

36.5K Reads 3.1K Votes 15 Part Story
Ⓣ By soundthealarm Completed

"I'm a goner,
Somebody catch my breath,
I want to be known by you."

In which a boy and a girl meet at the most unlikely of places: the top of a building, both ready to end it. Who talks who down and who jumps?

[SHORT STORY][In Love and Death Series]
Copyright © 2015 by soundthealarm

- - Mar 10, 2016
I like how we get to get a glance of the girls character. It a very interesting take on a very touchy subject, I think personally
From the top of the steps I'd be like, "Excuse me, could you please leave?"
thehungergrows thehungergrows Mar 15, 2016
I absolutely love TOP and this was so good to read. I had no idea that I was getting myself into such a good story. This was such a good read. :) I enjoyed this very much and please keep writing so we can keep reading!!
Iucifer Iucifer Mar 06, 2016
it's really short but i love that, honestly. i think this is really really sad but defiantly beautiful and extremely interesting. i really really wanna carry on reading, plus i like the way you write :-)
Rhuthshana Rhuthshana Feb 15, 2016
This is so interesting! Although I think you could be a little more descriptive in explaining the scene. Otherwise, great way to start if off :)
author_shagun author_shagun Feb 14, 2016
Intriguing beginning, reminds me of this movie A Long Way Down in some ways.